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【徵求評論心得】最弱的我其實乃最強？
ENTRY #2
Author: 滔江社
Published:
May 31, 2023
【徵求評論心得】最弱的我其實乃最強？
Published:
May 31, 2023
ENTRY #2
複：原來是我搞錯了
Author: 滔江社
Published:
May 31, 2023
1 Min Read
195 Words
No Plagiarism!iDpV0BNNcM0XJryg1EPyposted on PＥNAＮＡ

好的，原來我被誤導了，再看看就發現搞錯了。

你說翅膀啊，我就以為是飛行比賽，還能用劍揮別人的

靠北啦原來是打架比賽，我還以為是無規則飛行比賽啦

539Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjyMa3QdLEQ

還是我搞錯了？有些誤導性，建議再多介紹一下比賽規則啊、背景啊、到底是什麼，可以清晰點

然後認真看，發現原來比想像中無聊多了哈哈哈⋯⋯文筆還是欣賞的，但⋯⋯細節全無，背景不清，建議重寫，而且真的起承轉合非常不清晰，壓根看不出。

539Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjhm1s3pz8u

但還是那句，我願意幫忙喔！需要的話就找我，我建議重寫加上設計和宣傳可能可以上熱榜

539Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc6MDAcnVlZ

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