我比較喜歡舊版。449Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvd0d8cLoWO
在舊版描述雙方打鬥的段落，用字簡潔也很有畫面。而且要說全篇開頭的話，雖然新版有種悲壯感，但我覺得勢均力敵的局面會比一面倒更好看。449Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp4kivAFXrA
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第一章投票！交換閲讀心得！獲得大量P幣！
Published:
Jul 30, 2023
ENTRY #35
投舊版一票
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夏季雨
夏季雨
Published:
Jul 30, 2023
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