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心得徵收中！！——《平凡的我竟然是死亡遊戲萬人迷》
ENTRY #4
Author: 眞室邇
Published:
Jun 13, 2023
心得徵收中！！——《平凡的我竟然是死亡遊戲萬人迷》
Published:
Jun 13, 2023
ENTRY #4
另類讀者
Author: 眞室邇
Published:
Jun 13, 2023
1 Min Read
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我喜歡自己玩密室逃脫，多過看別人玩，武俠小説我喜歡看，是因爲我沒可以輕功水上漂。

作爲序章，現實+幻境，都交代的很詳細，讀者也大致知道你想怎麽玩。

我覺得時下流行的那些梗不用比較好，需要我一個一個的列出來嗎？會給讀者一種作者很懶惰的感覺，當然後面作者高談闊論，確實學富五車。399Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjH31plvJK6

我覺得人物的塑造比較分明，幾個學霸各有千秋，不過一上來就死掉的朱彬，想是後面有伏筆吧，我不太相信他就這樣死掉了，加入壞蛋集團了，或者是間諜，隨便一個走向都可以寫很多。399Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1rOm8XvfcV

整體來説，可以服用。

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