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小黑屋的早讀筆記
ISSUE #51
Author: 倒提壺
Published:
Jan 17, 2024
小黑屋的早讀筆記
Author: 倒提壺
Published:
Jan 17, 2024
ISSUE #51
2024/01/15-讓腺體做點事
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謝天謝地我終於有時間今日讀書。

186Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtgo504i4o2

轉折點裡面提到感性影響是還在人體化學成份分泌這個有點出乎我意料，太科學了。

不過確實我在看故事發現有出乎意料發展時，常常會想要確認前面是不是有漏看什麼。

當發現作者前面有伏筆時就會覺得很滿足，也會感覺作者很有巧思。

186Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1JnuGro9pg

至於情緒部分，我覺得自己就有點膝蓋中箭了。

因為要怎麼讓人物充滿強烈情緒渲染持續給讀者刺激這部分目前我做不好，只能用情節轉折推動變化，顯得故事少了一點人味。

216.73.216.114

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小黑屋的早讀筆記
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Last updated: Jul 8, 2024
Total word count: 18,921
Total reading time: 63 Minutes
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倒提壺
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