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感謝回饋活動——薔薇番外車車許願池
ENTRY #9
Author: 古潮兒
Published:
Nov 4, 2023
感謝回饋活動——薔薇番外車車許願池
Published:
Nov 4, 2023
ENTRY #9
靈慾合一的極致
Author: 古潮兒
Published:
Nov 4, 2023
1 Min Read
227 Words
No Plagiarism!OFlRqAbOsxPaJCoaDUf1posted on PＥNAＮＡ

由於最近忙於出文，在最後一日來個遲來的心得，說真的，菇菇的H文除了文筆優雅之外，也讓我大開眼界，除了一些難度極高的動作，還有一些意想不到的構思，好像人肉搾汁機便是挑戰腦洞的大膽設計。最後令人明白一件事，就是Ｈ文也可描寫出靈慾合一的境界，萬薔與盛嘉行二人的愛不是空口說，而是由行動做出來，作者對這種體驗身心昇華的意境也掌握得很好。

最後來到許願部分，希望菇菇可以繼續支持本人最新的奇幻愛情小說，我最近特意寫了外傳部分，也請菇菇幫忙為小弟評個文：316Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJIqIbMj2W1
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