讀完了木刻的《花開五姊妹》，於是在這邊跟大家分享。444Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6KRIhJ993q
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故事中，能讓五姊妹各自都負責一個環節，一起努力救人，我覺得這點很棒。444Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqQxCuJpb14
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如同木刻在後記所說，主角在與母親、姊姊之間的互動、情感鋪陳略顯不足，在角色的外貌上也缺乏著墨，讀者其實沒辦法想像他們各自是什麼樣子，這樣其實有點可惜。444Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpuVwfdFJST
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男主的前世是賢者，這在開頭說過，但是在番外又補了前前世的段落，便顯得有些突然了。倘若在故事中，在該段落前面，安排過男主顯露出社畜知識的橋段作為鋪陳，應該會好很多。444Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9Oxq4dd1bb
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個人認為，本作的優點在於用簡單的情節，去傳達拯救家人這個純樸又很能讓人體會的情感，要是對此有更多描寫，想必也會更加觸動人心。444Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEGkdXTc4Lr
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大概是這個樣子。444Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFiWcE4axNU
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因為字數未達三百，就不申請獎勵了。444Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8nmMTzBLl5
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夜臨的書評區（不開放報名，我想寫才寫）
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夜臨 Yalin Hayami
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
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Oct 29, 2023
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【書評】《花開五姊妹》──姊妹同心，性轉亦可 原作：木刻
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