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來寫OO詩 ⑤：隱題詩
ENTRY #34
Author: 玹竹
Published:
Nov 22, 2023
來寫OO詩 ⑤：隱題詩
Published:
Nov 22, 2023
ENTRY #34
《想輕聲道句你可安好》
Author: 玹竹
Published:
Nov 22, 2023
1 Min Read
173 Words
No Plagiarism!BjlTwUet1zVDpb6IykAPposted on PＥNAＮＡ

想是秋風在笑我

輕輕地，落葉撫首

那一聲問候如哽在喉

在人行道盡頭，我知道你也看見了我

曾經我那句未能給予的承諾

事到如今的你已有了他人守候

與你擦肩過，可我終究沒能開口

不去打擾，你的安稳生活

踏碎滿地葉紅，問好的話語就深鎖心頭

420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKQNGhdd4pB

420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiccNL4KUsm

第一次挑戰隠題詩，確實比起一般的詩要更難發揮一點，能寫的好的人真的很厲害！

說個題外話，不知創挑主有沒有聽過循環詩？這也是一個我覺得十分有挑戰性的詩作類型！

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