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黑歷史整理-新詩/現代詩
ISSUE #1
Author: 穹葉
黑歷史整理-新詩/現代詩
Author: 穹葉
ISSUE #1
新詩《牙刷》
No Plagiarism!bcZhNsk16CD9M99XzWdTposted on PＥNAＮＡ

-2024-

#物品擬人

這首新詩的誕生很簡單，但過程相當曲折，就是起床刷牙要更新牙刷的時候突然想到，然後就忘了，到了晚上洗澡時感覺忘了什麼詩，一番腦力激盪想起來了，雖然等到睡前刷牙時應該也會想起來，算是意外之喜吧。（純屬廢話）

《牙刷》

他久經沙場　早已是個老練的將士

怒髮衝冠　張牙舞爪

鮮血酸澀的洗禮　為他製成粉色的衣裝

偶爾有綠葉飄散　隨即發臭腐爛

偶爾有碎肉果腹　不知是人是獸

或淚或雨

沖刷不了那無情的戰場

洗滌不清那泛黃的夢魘

山石崩落　悉數掩埋

只是換成另一種形式存在

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黑歷史整理-新詩/現代詩
Poetry
Spiritual
Last updated: Jul 20, 2024
Total word count: 6,997
Total reading time: 23 Minutes
Writer:
穹葉
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