我覺得不太像小說，反而有點像怪談小遊戲的文字版本。
在人物對白時，加些情感描寫會更佳。不然會很像許多機器人一起講話。
劇情方面設定還不錯，但推理描寫感覺有些簡略。
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對《異常調查局》和《異常調查局:後室》的評價
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