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幫我看看人間的文章要改進什麼（有獎金）
ENTRY #9
Author: 溪嵐
Published:
May 25, 2025
幫我看看人間的文章要改進什麼（有獎金）
Published:
May 25, 2025
ENTRY #9
標點符號，重點強調，節奏安排
Author: 溪嵐
Published:
May 25, 2025
1 Min Read
80 Words
No Plagiarism!wAiqDZAgKzqVZatzmR8Bposted on PＥNAＮＡ

1.標點符號有些地方可能不是那麼恰當

2.有些不是很重要的地方過度強調

3.段落銜接有點怪

4.對人物的修飾可以多一些

5.對想表達的事物可以更精準

6.對白設計很好，但要加一些其他的

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