介紹：哈囉哈囉，我是林梟，近兩年來開始偶爾會想寫小說，不過更新很慢就是了ww
身為月亮計畫與米哈遊雙廚，我在幾個月前上傳了《廢墟圖書館，但希兒》，閱讀量慘淡，作者的文筆也一樣虛弱，總是覺得少了些什麼。
需求：因此，我希望能有人來替我看一下，如果能給出我能理解的錯誤與改進方式就更好了。
順帶一提，這部作品仍在緩慢更新(作者堅持每週至少一更)，如果可以的話能去幫我看看，如果喜歡就更好了！
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創作路上不孤獨，叔叔與「貓貓夥伴」陪伴你！
Published:
Jun 8, 2025
ENTRY #738
林梟想要《廢墟圖書館，但希兒》的「讀者心得」！
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