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交響J評文/心得專欄
ISSUE #20
Author: 交響J
交響J評文/心得專欄
Author: 交響J
ISSUE #20
【踏月行】評文
No Plagiarism!tdzfu4QM2wBBJ78P1VOSposted on PＥNAＮＡ

江璃月離開家獨自出去闖天下的舉動，真的很勇敢，期待她能闖出自己的一番天下。

作者的寫作筆法相當成熟，文字的精美度也很棒，故事整理流暢性非常好，覺得作者您已經不需要再求評了，各方面的發展都很成熟，現在要操心的是劇情的安排，能不能讓讀者欲罷不能。

這就要看作者編故事的能力囉。目前我看到第四章覺得很棒。

以上，感謝分享一部很棒的作品。^^

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Last updated: Jul 7, 2025
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