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【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第二期
ENTRY #3
Author: 陽壽木魚
Published:
Jul 1, 2025
【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第二期
Published:
Jul 1, 2025
ENTRY #3
一千零一個月夜
Author: 陽壽木魚
Published:
Jul 1, 2025
1 Min Read
191 Words
No Plagiarism!stfGRJdL19IkxgPnm5iMposted on PＥNAＮＡ

1.類別：奇幻/冒險/輕小說/反英雄（？42Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS0rSabMhs2

2.希望評論章節：楔子+第一章到第四節的部分

（字數：9.6k）

ps.我第一章還沒寫完，後面預計還有兩節嗚嗚

3.希望評論的方向

角色塑造跟互動，是否足夠鮮明/整體氛圍會不會無聊到讓人很快棄坑/劇情能不能讓讀者想知道接下來的發展，因為我現在才剛起步沒多久啊啊啊

ps.這個是我把之前的全部打掉重寫過的，如果看過舊版的話整體風格差很大w

非常感謝！

連結：

https://m.penana.com/story/184774/%E4%B8%80%E5%8D%83%E9%9B%B6%E4%B8%80%E5%80%8B%E6%9C%88%E5%A4%9C/toc

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