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【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第二期
ENTRY #6
Author: Yuki Selune
Published:
Jul 1, 2025
【評文活動】嵐斕子在評文——第二期
Published:
Jul 1, 2025
ENTRY #6
創辦NTR神教 教主卻是純？愛派
Author: Yuki Selune
Published:
Jul 1, 2025
1 Min Read
142 Words
No Plagiarism!BnT8YOvHYG62SgNZ4mT8posted on PＥNAＮＡ

1.類別：NTR/純愛/玄幻/穿越/腦洞

2.希望評論章節：1-17章［字數：50034］

3.希望評論的方向：因為這部作品沒什麼邏輯可言，希望不要針對合理性去評論，第一章有修改過能不能幫我看一下夠不夠吸引人來看，其他照嵐佬的方式就可以了！

作品連結：https://www.penana.com/story/181474/%E5%89%B5%E8%BE%A6ntr%E7%A5%9E%E6%95%99-%E6%95%99%E4%B8%BB%E5%8D%BB%E6%98%AF%E7%B4%94-%E6%84%9B%E6%B4%BE

感謝大佬舉辦！

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