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幫羅璃評文～～
ENTRY #3
Author: 存在
Published:
Jul 30, 2025
幫羅璃評文～～
Published:
Jul 30, 2025
ENTRY #3
超級不專業的感想
Author: 存在
Published:
Jul 30, 2025
1 Min Read
158 Words
No Plagiarism!q9DcBMDKmcrZMGnUKbolposted on PＥNAＮＡ

我不是專業的，我只是提供我的想法（而且我可能看錯）

首先，斷句的部分建議結尾不要使用「，」，因為句已經結束了，「？」、「！」、「。」等應該會比較好

我自己是只在對話框裡加「。」，對話匡外的之後視情況補

而後我看的時候看見「””」這類格式，雖然似乎沒什麼問題，但又似乎哪裡怪怪的

而後人物對話的部分以下格式我看的很怪

xxx：「12345。」xxx（行動）

如果對話匡後面會明確讓讀者知道是誰的話就不用在前面加說話者了

216.73.216.82

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