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你寫文章我來評（讀後感）
ENTRY #3
Author: 五香肉丁
Published:
Oct 26, 2019
你寫文章我來評（讀後感）
Published:
Oct 26, 2019
ENTRY #3
不屬於我的聖戰
Author: 五香肉丁
Published:
Oct 26, 2019
1 Min Read
87 Words
No Plagiarism!eiUx1HbuBFIkuwqhigb6posted on PＥNAＮＡ

前言：

這是一部在兩年前完成短篇小說，最近重新修改一小部分內容，希望透過評價而知道自己的小說缺點在那裡，同時也一直很想挑戰長篇作品，所以希望給予相關的建議。

正文：

https://www.penana.com/story/54134/648Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIz94n0jKyF

讀後感的態度：嚴厲

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