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《狂亂文字》互評挑戰！- 第十回
ENTRY #1
Author: 有聊得很
Published:
Oct 23, 2020
《狂亂文字》互評挑戰！- 第十回
Published:
Oct 23, 2020
ENTRY #1
評《狂亂文字》刀奔玉栩入 2020-09——許崩刀入獄
Author: 有聊得很
Published:
Oct 23, 2020
1 Min Read
166 Words
No Plagiarism!w4VXPKlbv7xYT1QEITOIposted on PＥNAＮＡ

         這一次好像是第二次評天洛卡大兄的作品了。

         這一篇表面看來好像是訴說一個十分平凡 的故事，平凡得淡如水一般，是看了很容易忘記那種⋯

          但是⋯

          將刀奔玉栩入拼入許崩刀入獄要拼得絲絲入扣真的有點難。

          況且⋯

          看似平凡的故事也隱藏了發人心醒的道理。

          世人瘋了⋯可以把一把刀判入獄，但仍有醉了的人眼不花耳不聾把事情看得一清二楚。

          最後⋯

          還有一個建議，把故事寫成那把刀是自首的會不會更好^_^

        

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