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創作挑戰第三期語評
ISSUE #3
Author: 寂魚
創作挑戰第三期語評
Author: 寂魚
ISSUE #3
▌篇05 默默守護的愛
No Plagiarism!eisCulQsgGuw7yLN7jEYposted on PＥNAＮＡ

​​​​​​​▌類型 短文

▌作者 一次逍遙

808Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4ZUBLbCoWs

從簡短幾句文句之中，直接點提出男主角的內心反覆的情緒，借喻路上行走而過的那沒有緣分的女孩，卻間接切入更深一層的背後家族。808Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLJ5xxYL2qg
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寒冬，雖只是簡單一撇。808Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwaQ0AJrfJp
然而營造出來的，更多是短文中，四人各自不同的定位。（男主、女孩、福伯、女孩男友）808Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEZSSxmMydm
808Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQIl4M9nPUe
只願為一背後默默守護的他，而利益有時卻只是個說詞罷了。808Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLMUDPzLOC7
如同文中所說道，那男主內心既以用情至深，何嘗又不能嘗試拋開家族，與那女孩一同奔走一回呢？

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創作挑戰第三期語評
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Last updated: Jul 5, 2025
Total word count: 27,930
Total reading time: 93 Minutes
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