最後一句,「少了它我好不舒服」挺可愛的,不知為什麼會令人會心一笑,明明是悲傷的小說。但是還不到很悲,感覺有兩段「繞過視角」是第一段,然後「不要我了」是第二段。但是你用了自卑的愛情,可我感受不到主角的自卑,就覺得只是錯過,之前不喜歡或看不到這個人,現在喜歡了,人家卻不喜歡主角了。76Please respect copyright.PENANARb26vLkz7z
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如果以「錯過」為主題,會寫出怎樣的故事呢?76Please respect copyright.PENANAOiFDH66pWg
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我打著手機,你看著電影。76Please respect copyright.PENANAmZvHEuvSuT
我不知道電影情節,你不知道我的手機內容。76Please respect copyright.PENANADK3o0k97nM
可我知道的是當你放下電影,我放下手機的時候,76Please respect copyright.PENANAfKbMBhGpZ5
我們彼此對望,76Please respect copyright.PENANAozyD4RaiFC
才發現「放」得太遲了,已變「曾經」。76Please respect copyright.PENANAXzJ1Dxm9F0
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打手機,看電影比喻各忙各的,這樣說應該就知道這故事在描繪什麼了。76Please respect copyright.PENANApUDaovOic2
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謝謝「帥氣哥哥」的參與。76Please respect copyright.PENANAwT7Ud6Qy1R
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帥氣哥哥〈蘆葦花〉76Please respect copyright.PENANAwSoAA12fzk
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