最後一句,「少了它我好不舒服」挺可愛的,不知為什麼會令人會心一笑,明明是悲傷的小說。但是還不到很悲,感覺有兩段「繞過視角」是第一段,然後「不要我了」是第二段。但是你用了自卑的愛情,可我感受不到主角的自卑,就覺得只是錯過,之前不喜歡或看不到這個人,現在喜歡了,人家卻不喜歡主角了。80Please respect copyright.PENANAN3nBAj5Vny
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如果以「錯過」為主題,會寫出怎樣的故事呢?80Please respect copyright.PENANAcNtdwzAMY5
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我打著手機,你看著電影。80Please respect copyright.PENANAqEmawN0lEk
我不知道電影情節,你不知道我的手機內容。80Please respect copyright.PENANAcBn0TONyt0
可我知道的是當你放下電影,我放下手機的時候,80Please respect copyright.PENANAn86txvmLrB
我們彼此對望,80Please respect copyright.PENANAE1ZKuMeQax
才發現「放」得太遲了,已變「曾經」。80Please respect copyright.PENANA38He6jE5sx
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打手機,看電影比喻各忙各的,這樣說應該就知道這故事在描繪什麼了。80Please respect copyright.PENANAwCHJFAHP0A
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謝謝「帥氣哥哥」的參與。80Please respect copyright.PENANAd2OvSJeBRl
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帥氣哥哥〈蘆葦花〉80Please respect copyright.PENANAseNWtfiMO4
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