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《旅行青蛙楓楓‧與你看盡世上最溫柔的風景》
ISSUE #75
Author: 筆璃~(≧▽≦)/~
Published:
Oct 21, 2022
《旅行青蛙楓楓‧與你看盡世上最溫柔的風景》
Author: 筆璃~(≧▽≦)/~
Published:
Oct 21, 2022
ISSUE #75
為你介紹一百首情詩（22）
No Plagiarism!gNW5uvDjaAnUEg6sc5lOposted on PＥNAＮＡ

第二十二天，峰峰教授以名詞寫詩的技巧，引用卞之琳經典之作《斷章》作教材：

363Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrxXXucWWyv

你站在橋上看風景，

看風景的人在樓上看你。

明月裝飾了你的窗子，

你裝飾了別人的夢。

363Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ874F4Htytw

《斷章》短短三十五字，卻主要由名詞 「橋」、「風景」、「人」、「明月」、「窗子」、「夢」、「你」和「別人」組成。表面詩作看似平靜，內在蘊藏豐富情感🧡只有明月能令黑夜重現光芒，只有你能令夢圓滿而別具意義🧡今日，楓楓想灑點文思，來個浪漫版的斷章取義，將詩手抄送給蟹蟹（笑🧡）

#寫給樹的第七十五篇微小說363Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡguBgxgrRvj

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《旅行青蛙楓楓‧與你看盡世上最溫柔的風景》
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