是說昨晚還是忍不住，把舊文再再一次重看多遍了，因為不這樣做，真的做不了修改的作業！
還好最後也忍住了沒有大幅度改變
就只是加些形容，刪些看似「冗文」....
前兩天回頭做了人設，似乎對修訂也有點幫助！
之後重點是怎樣接下去@@？
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