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各位好==

因為最近我的作品好像對大家來說有點前後矛盾、符號用錯怪怪的或者人物的問題，

所以！

我來用個評文的相反，

幫我評文～～

我最近真的很欠缺各位大佬的指導和評判ww，越狠越好😈

謝謝各位老師！

（評文作品：相逢之戀、暗黑鎖鏈）

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